Thursday, November 13, 2014

An Outline for My Written Researched Proposal (FINAL EDIT)

Intro -       

Hook: Clean air is something that is essential to peoples health and life. Air that cities, like Tacoma, do not have.

Motive: 1. It's important because it is affecting everyone who is living in Tacoma.
             2. EPA is fining factories around Tacoma for Clean Air Act Violations.
             3. Get this known to the public.

Thesis: People need to pay attention to Tacoma's air quality because it can affect the people living in Tacoma and even the state of Washington in negative ways.

Map: Begin by discussing about Tacoma. Then talk about the air quality and its effects on peoples health and house values. And finish by talking about the solution to fixing this problem and why it would work. 


Problem -    

What is it?: Air pollution in Tacoma using information from this and this

Why It's a problem?: Affects economy and health of individuals who have been living in Tacoma within the last decade using information from thisthisthis, and this


Solution -     

What is it?: To notify the public about this problem.

Why?: To get people to notice this problem by discussing economic consequences with this 


Conclusion

 I am not the smartest individual to solve this kind of problem. But if this problem is discussed with other people, it has a greater chance to reach the ears of someone who can help with these problems.

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